the college essay

Mandeep Singh
Mr. Gallagher
English 12cp period 6
10/28/08
College Essay
I’m from New Delhi the capital of India. I speak three languages Hindi, Punjabi and English. I’ve been here three years ago and know I’m senior in the high school. I’ll graduate this year. My father and mother and my brother live together. I took two for plane and 20 hour to com here to united state. I’m took two plan to come here. When I was in India I had an accident. I’m going school to my house with my bicycle. Some body ride a bike so fast and he was hit my bicycle. I was fall down in the road and bicycle wheel was bend he was stay over there and he was take me at hospital. I’m all set not too much hurt and he called my house and tells every thing. I tell to my family it’s my fault. In India I’m live with my grand parent and my parent they all lived together. My parent and my big brother come here. My grandparents live in India.
My grandfather retired police officer. My grand mother is lot of historicahouse wife. In my country a l building over there. The golden temple in India the temple made for all gold and out side is all real gold. It’s my religion Sikh temple .It’s same thing like church. I’m Indian and Sikh and I proud to be a Sikh. I have good friends in India if they need help I ‘m help them. When I need help they‘re helped me. In India I have a long hair and I am wear turban in my head. When I came united state I was cut my hair. It’s so longs and I am cutting my hair. My father called my grand father and told him to he was cut his hair. y grand father was so angry when he talk to me. I feel sorry to him but he was so feel bad I’m cutting my hair.
When I’m first time to come here I was so exited and nervous to going to new country. I was so nervous when I saw new people. I’m speaking Hindi and Punjabi in my house because my mother knows Hindi and Punjabi. First in America I was speak english a little bit not fluently now i'm understand everything and talking to the people. I want to go to nice college and nice career like pharmist or nurse because I want to help my parents. i want to my better future.